I changed my direction of my socially responsible packaging project, from a rice bag that converts into a shopping bag (which addresses the social issue of plastic bags), to a rice bag that doubles up as a filter bag (for filtering water in aid situations, with the distribution of rice). This was as a result of the following feedback :
Feedback from other Tutor - Mar (From previous week)
"Rice bags are NOT “littered”. Littering is an issue of items consumed outside of the home, which are irresponsibly disposed of (candy wrappers, chewing gum, cigarette butts).
I don’t accept your argument that the rice bags present wildlife suffocation dangers; that is an issue with thin-film plastic grocery bags, not the thick-film plastic rice bags.
I would suggest redirect your social issue to distribution of rice during natural disasters, which is a social issue. The issues you have highlighted are only environmental issues, and I reiterate that this project is about socially responsible packaging."
Peer 1 - Sunprit Singh
Strong idea, in addressing deep global problems. Consider how the rice is packaged and if it will be okay to just enclose it in a filtering material. Research on materials used, and the level of filtering they do.
Peer 2 - Hyunjin Kim
Food and water aid is a huge social issue in the world, and this product packaging may help contribute to the solution. The bag has to cheap, so it can be well distributed, unlike many current solutions which aren't distributed well because of the price.
Consider what will happen to the bag after its use as a water filter. Maybe it can be used as a normal bag later on?
Feedback from tutor - Sam
Changing the direction of the concept from a rice bag that turns into a shopping bag, to a rice bag that can be used as a water filter bag with the distribution of aid, is a much stronger option. Taking on global social issues especially in relation to the necessities of life, being food and water, will make my project much stronger and appealing.
May not have to completely purify water, as other current solutions do, which include purifying water bottles. As these are a more expensive and less distributed option.
The rationale must be direct and precise. When writing about existing current solutions, it has to be done properly, instead of just copy and pasting an image. Talk about pros and cons.
Peer 1 - Sunprit Singh
Strong idea, in addressing deep global problems. Consider how the rice is packaged and if it will be okay to just enclose it in a filtering material. Research on materials used, and the level of filtering they do.
Peer 2 - Hyunjin Kim
Food and water aid is a huge social issue in the world, and this product packaging may help contribute to the solution. The bag has to cheap, so it can be well distributed, unlike many current solutions which aren't distributed well because of the price.
Consider what will happen to the bag after its use as a water filter. Maybe it can be used as a normal bag later on?
Feedback from tutor - Sam
Changing the direction of the concept from a rice bag that turns into a shopping bag, to a rice bag that can be used as a water filter bag with the distribution of aid, is a much stronger option. Taking on global social issues especially in relation to the necessities of life, being food and water, will make my project much stronger and appealing.
May not have to completely purify water, as other current solutions do, which include purifying water bottles. As these are a more expensive and less distributed option.
The rationale must be direct and precise. When writing about existing current solutions, it has to be done properly, instead of just copy and pasting an image. Talk about pros and cons.